Hey guys,
I have a commercial render I am allowed to post.
It's almost finished with some minor tweaks that have to be done.
If you guys have a any comments or suggestions, just fire away.
Rendered in PMC kernel.
Modelled in Modo, rendering in RC3 and post done in Photoshop.
Thanks for watching.
Exterior project
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MaTtY631990
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Nice work 
. Just a couple of things you could try to improve. If possible try to get some more bump going on ground textures. Also looks like there is a smoothing issue with fence on the right, wants to appear flat. Other then that all looks good.
. Just a couple of things you could try to improve. If possible try to get some more bump going on ground textures. Also looks like there is a smoothing issue with fence on the right, wants to appear flat. Other then that all looks good.-
paoloverona
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for my opinion the render is ok (even I prefer phtotreal renders),
as Maty say: a little bit of bump in the road and sidewalk texture would emprove the overall quality.
Cheers, Paolo
as Maty say: a little bit of bump in the road and sidewalk texture would emprove the overall quality.
Cheers, Paolo
intel i7 3820 3.6GHz, 16Gb 1600Hz, windows 7 professional 64bit, gtx 580 3Gb x2, Octane 3dsMax 2.58
Hey guys, thanks for the replies.
The project is finished, client is happy.
But for my portfolio I wanted to improve the image a little bit.
I think I'm almost there and this is what I got so far.
I want to render the final version very soon, so if you have comment hurry!
This image is straight out of Octane except for the sky and a little bit of bloom.
In the final version I will do proper post production, add some reflections in the windows and stuff.
The project is finished, client is happy.
But for my portfolio I wanted to improve the image a little bit.
I think I'm almost there and this is what I got so far.
I want to render the final version very soon, so if you have comment hurry!
This image is straight out of Octane except for the sky and a little bit of bloom.
In the final version I will do proper post production, add some reflections in the windows and stuff.
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Win7 Pro x64, Phenon II 940, 8 GB, Geforce 470 - Modo, Zbrush