here is a current status of my project "House with garden", rendered with the OctaneRender 3ds-Max Plugin.
What's your opinion?
What could I do better?
Thanks in advance!
Cheers
House with garden
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Hey folks,
here is a current status of my project "House with garden", rendered with the OctaneRender 3ds-Max Plugin.
What's your opinion?
What could I do better?
Thanks in advance!
Cheers
here is a current status of my project "House with garden", rendered with the OctaneRender 3ds-Max Plugin.
What's your opinion?
What could I do better?
Thanks in advance!
Cheers
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Win 7 64 | 3x NVIDIA Geforce GTX 580 | Intel Core i7 3820 3.6 GHz | 32 GB
Looks really good!
A few comments:
Put in a background picture or something, it looks like the world 'ends' at the back.
Random the roof tiling a bit, I see repeating patterns.
Maybe change the sun direction, so the front is in the sunlight.
The fence materials is not realistic. It should look darker and more like metal.
Put in some interior stuff, maybe curtains and make the glass see through.
A few comments:
Put in a background picture or something, it looks like the world 'ends' at the back.
Random the roof tiling a bit, I see repeating patterns.
Maybe change the sun direction, so the front is in the sunlight.
The fence materials is not realistic. It should look darker and more like metal.
Put in some interior stuff, maybe curtains and make the glass see through.
Win7 Pro x64, Phenon II 940, 8 GB, Geforce 470 - Modo, Zbrush
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FractalBuddha
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I like the vegetation. On the left it look very realistic.
I agree with renom_v.
You could add more vegetation in the background at the left of the bridge.
The curves in the fence need more polygons.
The tiles on the roof could be real geometry or at least put sum bump.
All textures need to be refine with bump, specularity....
Can you put some 3D grass and weed on the ground at the entrance so we don't see the sharp edges?
Put some dead leaves on the entrance.
I agree with renom_v.
You could add more vegetation in the background at the left of the bridge.
The curves in the fence need more polygons.
The tiles on the roof could be real geometry or at least put sum bump.
All textures need to be refine with bump, specularity....
Can you put some 3D grass and weed on the ground at the entrance so we don't see the sharp edges?
Put some dead leaves on the entrance.
Imagine reality
2 x GTX 560 | i7 | windows 7
2 x GTX 560 | i7 | windows 7
nice start!eagle1986 wrote: ..What's your opinion?
What could I do better?..
I would recomend to play with lighting =)
& here's some inspirations for You:
http://pinterest.com/pin/84653667966197745/
cheers
What did you use for vegetation? Forest Pack? or manual scattering? I agree for the roof, I do actually miss the displacement or stronger Bump a lot as I had to build some similar one and ended up modeling the entire roof heaving the model...Actually is there any techniques to random or vary the color of an applied material on a surface?
Win 7 64 | 2 X MSI AERO GtX 1070| Intel I7-6850K| 32 GB DDR4 RAM | Asus X99 II-A
Nice scene. The vegetation looks very good, but the house looks a bit artificial imho. With the iron fence, the whole thing has somewhat a Tim Burton design style. 
French Blender user - CPU : intel Quad QX9650 at 3GHz - 8GB of RAM - Windows 7 Pro 64 bits. Display GPU : GeForce GTX 480 (2 Samsung 2443BW-1920x1600 monitors). External GPUs : two EVGA GTX 580 3GB in a Cubix GPU-Xpander Pro 2. NVidia Driver : 368.22.