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wow very nice work, just some little things: the exagonal wood box on the left have a texture a bit too big maybe, the wire of the tamble lamp have a not natural shape, the library looks as a unique piece, but in reality it's a composition of different boards.
If you make those correction it's a five star work here!
If you make those correction it's a five star work here!
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paoloverona
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really nice render Sixthlaw!
I'm agree with evo regarding the library and the wooden box...but i don't see nothing "wrong" with the lamp
I don't understand why the floor have a bump effect only near the chair.
As last......better change material for the box in the library (seems to be the same material) and should use little more accuracy on the carpet (is totally flat)
Waiting for updates or new renders.
Cheers, Paolo
I'm agree with evo regarding the library and the wooden box...but i don't see nothing "wrong" with the lamp
I don't understand why the floor have a bump effect only near the chair.
As last......better change material for the box in the library (seems to be the same material) and should use little more accuracy on the carpet (is totally flat)
Waiting for updates or new renders.
Cheers, Paolo
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i refer to the cable under the table.paoloverona wrote:...but i don't see nothing "wrong" with the lamp
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now i have understood! 
I saw that thing too....but when i saw the clip for the wire I thought that was almost ok, but you are right the clip is too far from the bending point of the wire (seems that the wire is an iron cable)....but could be only an error due to the frontal view, isn't it?
I saw that thing too....but when i saw the clip for the wire I thought that was almost ok, but you are right the clip is too far from the bending point of the wire (seems that the wire is an iron cable)....but could be only an error due to the frontal view, isn't it?
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very nice and cute scene, composition is great
(don't really notice a problem with that wire - sticks out, but you get that in real life situations, often time the cables are rigid, looks like something is holding it there anyway)
how many light sources, I would guess there is a huge plane of light coming 90 degrees from the side, and lamps are for show?
and there's some falloff shading going on the desk lamp?
is the room closed up or open behind the camera or something.. the lighting is great
(don't really notice a problem with that wire - sticks out, but you get that in real life situations, often time the cables are rigid, looks like something is holding it there anyway)
how many light sources, I would guess there is a huge plane of light coming 90 degrees from the side, and lamps are for show?
and there's some falloff shading going on the desk lamp?
is the room closed up or open behind the camera or something.. the lighting is great
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