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ClairObscur
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Grettings.

I am user of DazStudio for soon a year. I love to work the body and making 3D body art creations. I am a new user of OR, and step by step i trying to understand how to use it better. Isnt easy, but i définitly love the possibility we have in 3D. I want to share here one of my first render with RC2.

Compositing the scene and avatar in Daz Studio 4.5 Pro
Exporting in Obj to Octane RC2
Final converted in Jpeg by Photoshop CS5 (no postwork).

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horror))))))
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Is not seen. how awful the girl get? hairy legs

http://www.render.ru/gallery/?gal_rub=1&gal_add=award
that's how people should look
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hey mate, did you read the title of the treat ? "one of my first result". I starting and learning... So, next time try to be more "constructive" if you know that word. Critism is interesting when people help and suggest, with respect.

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If you post something on the Internet, you know you will get honest respons so don't be angry about that. I agree he could be more constructive but it's also naive to think you will only get the respons you like specially when you make a girl that you call digital beauty =).
Etherway, it's you first try and you want some constructive response. I don't really know what you want to tell with you picture, is this 3d porn? If I look at you picture I miss contrast, maybe you can fix this with a clearer light source. But this really depends on what you want to tell.
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hmm, some crits.
I think you should work more on the pose, looks very un-natural, this includes the facial expression.
The hair looks odd too, but I guess Octane doesnt fully support hair.
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skin is terrible
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@elvis :)

- there is this thing called Uncanny valley http://enhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/U ... nny_valley
- when people look like the living dead
- and I would guess it's a lot of work to get realistic looking skin
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We are here in the official forum for Octane users, no ? We are also in the treat called "Gallery" and not "Contest". If you do not like the result of someone, continue your way. Isnt naive to think i am here in a adult place wish we can have intelligent and constructive critism.

If for you, to watch a woman nude mean porn, is your point of view. A Woman can also be watched nude with respect and beauty.

Thx you kavorka for your respectfull and constructive answer. I was happy to can show this first render, even he have lot of mistakes, hoping to have somes advices.

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