KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP

Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:56 pm

Indeed you're totally right, I'm going to "tighten up" the POV and focus mainly on the mixer.
I actually noticed that adding stuff didn't add that much to the scene as a whole...
I'll try something different, cheers!

Mon Jan 17, 2011 9:14 pm

matej wrote:It's turning out nice!

Try some different POVs that will make the main subject stand out more. The other stuff is there just as a 'filler', the blender is the important piece.

+1

Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:33 am

Yep, you're totally right guys, I'll focus more on the blender/mixer itself.
Thanks for your comms

If I remember well, we can post as many images as we want, I might post 2 or 3 different images, with diverse POVs...

Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:54 am

ofcourse...

I was posting one image with like 4 different cameras response curve.

Put as more as You can.

Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:32 am

Thanks mlody47!

By the way, your Comp Entry looks great

Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:16 am

Looks good. I love blender.

There is something what bother me. Knifes looks weird.
Please compare with these references.

Or it could be an ostrich egg...

Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:43 am

Thanks gaua, you're totally right - I definitely have to fix this.
Cheers!

Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:56 pm

Hi guys!

I just tried another PoV - I think this one's much better.
What do you think?

I only changed this, I didn't fix texture issues (like the blank post-it note for example), or anything else.

I also tried a Vintage Film, I think it adds something to the picture too, BUT post-it notes didn't exist yet in the 1950's !!!

Thanks for your much appreciated comms !!!

Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:35 pm

Hi again !

Here's an update - I now really want to keep the Vintage look and "feel" of the Kodak Ektachrome 100 plusCD film
-> so I'll have to get rid of the post-it note, 'cause they didn't exist yet in the 1950's...

I'm also posting a second image with Photoshop post-prod, but I'll have to check the 1st post again, and see if that kind of effect is allowed...

Please keep posting your comms

Cheers everyone!

Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:13 pm

I just tried to add some flour on the spoon, the flour "bag" and the pie dish, but I'm not really keen on it...

I like the effect it has on the spoon but not on the other items.
What do you think?

Thanks in advance for your comms!