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Scottiefeng
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Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:46 pm

one more try as top.

Thanks guys.

Please provide hints how to PS. Really not good at PS except basic levels and curves stuff.
Jorgensen
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It's really getting better, but may i suggest to remove the trees or use some that are much smaller?

The apartment in the back seems blocked by trees

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Builtdown
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Much better.

Maybe the windows are a bit too dark. Make then a bit more like the color of the sky.
Scottiefeng
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one more try.

More comments / criticism Please.

Come on! :D

thanks.
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