I think the divets in the apple might be too strong and the texture/UV could use some improvements.
Your lights seem to be too strong, illuminating shadows. The fork looks like it is hovering in mid air.
Coffee looks much better and the graininess is gone.
Breakfast
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I still wouldn't want to eat this apple... Your texture is probably too low resolution. There is still something weird and not natural with it.
The liquid in the glass looks like beer with few foam... not the best beverage for a breakfast imho !
The liquid in the glass looks like beer with few foam... not the best beverage for a breakfast imho !
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Did you order orange juice?
There's actually a really nice material in the Live DB.
There's actually a really nice material in the Live DB.
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I will try that, as soon as my live account get fixed. I got deactivated again 
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