Lancia Delta

[gueoct]

Here my first reasonable octane rendering...

done on my Sony VAIO Laptop with a Geforce GT 425M (96 CUDA Cores) in 1h 50 min!
OCTANE ROCKS!!!!

[RatedR]

I like the look it.
Maybe try to put the white rims with the OZ logo on it like they where used in rally.

[radiant]

For a final piece the materials are very........... plain.

80% of the car is orange
You could at least sneak some metal chrome on the wheel plates or the front of the car.
It would be good to see this in different environment situations, such as mesh based environmental and atmosphere environment .
As for modeling, it is top notch

[gueoct]

i did not expect comments on wether people like the colour of the car.....
i tried metal on the wheel plates but it looks....... let´s say cheap
i would like to hear comments on the mood, car materials, walls....
as i just started with octane: how to add atmosphere effects within octane?

[radiant]

Im in the process on making 15+ Octane tutorials, i will be spending the next 6 hours editing and uploading them.
There are currently five up there so far, im now uploading the sixth.
I will be editing the seventh which is Octanes atmo settings such as HDRIs, RGB based worlds and sunsky. the encoding will take 40-50 min and uploading will take another 40-50 min.

http://www.youtube.com/user/MTimtam

[r4ytrace]

as an integrale Evo 1 owner I approve of this render! :p

I think the model is of an Evo 2 though (judging by the bucket seats)

having said that though yeh I do think the rims should be a kinda dull metal colour - the white OZ ones were usually a slightly different shape - those wheels are Speedlines -

Martini 6 livery would be cool too

[r4ytrace]

also the central disc/hub of the wheels needs the Lancia shield

I like the lighting etc. overall though

[daadaa]

Hey, a few comments, i do agree with the rest about the colour, and yea white rims will be nice also. modelling is very good in general, but edges are far too sharp. especially on the front bumper, it looking like a piece of machined aluminium. the tyres are also a little fake looking, the modelling is a little off and so is the material, i can put my finger on what but it doesnt look right. The head lamps should be far more reflective, thats for both the chrome and the glass. Also the indicator light on the side, currently it looks like someone stuck a fruit pastel on ur car. the materials for the walls and floor very good, but u do seem to have lost the shutline in the corner.

[gueoct]

thanks daadaa,
this was the first productive criticism! and you are so right!
you are mentioning all the details that i didn´t see anymore......

excuse me! i did not model this car myself. it´s a 3rdparty model from Evermotion.
what´s the point of modeling such a car for a test-tender............

thanks