Hi,
It´s a shame that you don´t have the previous versions here for comparison.
But here´s some comments:
- Still I would make the floor texture larger. Plus the bump is too strong and the blown out white area on the floor is not very nice.
- The coffee table is nice but you can´t really see it. Maybe make the kitchen counter 20% smaller so it wouldn´t take so big area of the picture.
- The kitchen doors are too reflective. Make them a bit more blurry and less reflective.
- Make the ceiling lamps a little bigger and lower the so they could be seen.
- I think the SMEG text and the handle should be more reflective
- Why so big empty area at the left side? Add a arm chair, a plant, or something.
- I hate the clock, but if you like it then it´s fine. I would take it out and put a nice poster or something there
- Are the ovens just textures? I would make them 3D.
- Builtdown
Queensland interior part 01 pls comment
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