Guess what, another apartment interior
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looks really interesting - but like Kavorka said the spaces between the wood are too big - looks like decking atm.
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Looks good 
Like the others said, the wood should be changed, it's not fitting the image. Also, the chair on the right should be more detailed as you see it quite easily.
And the glow/glare looks quite unnatural, try to increase the radius of it & reduce the opacity.

Like the others said, the wood should be changed, it's not fitting the image. Also, the chair on the right should be more detailed as you see it quite easily.
And the glow/glare looks quite unnatural, try to increase the radius of it & reduce the opacity.
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