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neo83_gr
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Modeling in sketchup and some editing done in gimp.
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I would use a different wood for the floor. That wood has spaces in it and is probably used for an outside deck.
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looks really interesting - but like Kavorka said the spaces between the wood are too big - looks like decking atm.
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Looks good :)
Like the others said, the wood should be changed, it's not fitting the image. Also, the chair on the right should be more detailed as you see it quite easily.
And the glow/glare looks quite unnatural, try to increase the radius of it & reduce the opacity.
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Thank you for commenting! I guess you are right about the wooden floor, even if I liked the texture.
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