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Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 2:34 pm
by KAMISI
Hello, I would like to share my first Octane Rendering - work is still in progress, thank you for any comments.

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 4:19 pm
by steveps3
very nice indeed. Your grey texture needs smoothing though. You can see the individual faces.

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 8:50 am
by KAMISI
Did not know before that you can smooth via textures. Thank you.

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 3:58 pm
by ribrahomedesign
good start.
one big thing , the tables and chairs are far to small in comparison with the door and the cars.
keep on posting
Rico

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 7:55 pm
by adiarc
I would use glossy material for the cars and try making the leaves darker green. Also if you are not using path tracing, try it. Sometimes it makes an outdoor scene better, sometimes not.

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 1:52 pm
by KAMISI
So here comes the next try. @ribrahomedesin: the cars were much too big, cant believe I didnt see that before :roll: @adiarc, yes, I think the trees look much better now. cars still need some changes.

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:47 pm
by adiarc
It's very dark now. You could try adding some exposure. And what happened to the ground floor textures? Also the street material was better before. Getting there! ;)

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:58 am
by steveps3
It is starting to look really good now.

The cobbles on the ground look a bit too large and I think the building needs a bit of texture. At the moment everything is just too flat.

A few more tweaks and this will start to get pretty photo realistic.

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 5:59 pm
by sam75
you must have a problem with your screen settings, this is way too dark

Re: Architectural Exterior Scene

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:02 am
by KAMISI
Thanks for your support. I really had to change some screen settings! So here is the final result - hope you like it.