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Thanks guys in advance.

Please give comments for this one.

Especially on the water shader...not sure.

I like it. Nice work.

I'm not an artist, but I get the feeling that the shader isn't as much the issue as it might be the geometry of the water - there are a lot of ripples in some places where, if it were a fluid simulation, would be relatively still.

A different suggestion - add some generic trees to the rear of the camera on the left, so that you can get some reflections in the glass on the left also

Water looks fine to me.

There is blowout on the left side of the image. You are losing the corner of your building to the sky. One of them should be darker.

Secondly, add some translucency to your leaves.

best,
O

haze wrote:I like it. Nice work.

I'm not an artist, but I get the feeling that the shader isn't as much the issue as it might be the geometry of the water - there are a lot of ripples in some places where, if it were a fluid simulation, would be relatively still.

A different suggestion - add some generic trees to the rear of the camera on the left, so that you can get some reflections in the glass on the left also

Thanks Haze, I will take your suggestion in next try.

Olitech wrote:Water looks fine to me.

There is blowout on the left side of the image. You are losing the corner of your building to the sky. One of them should be darker.

Secondly, add some translucency to your leaves.

best,
O

Thanks a lot Olitech. I agree.

I just could not figure out how to give transparency when using alpha map in the opacity setting? Any idea?

Scottiefeng wrote:

Olitech wrote:Water looks fine to me.

There is blowout on the left side of the image. You are losing the corner of your building to the sky. One of them should be darker.

Secondly, add some translucency to your leaves.

best,
O

Thanks a lot Olitech. I agree.

I just could not figure out how to give transparency when using alpha map in the opacity setting? Any idea?

Right here Scottie (green).
It's not opacity you want, it's transmission. And don't worry about scattering for now. Transmission is fine. You can input a colour or texture.

best,
O

Thanks mate,

I posted a pic I thought with better water.
Any comments on this one?