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Hello everyone! This is my first post and my first render using Octane. To be honest, im not really proud of this work, but i really didnt know where to go with it. Your critique is very apreciated!
Thanks
Garret

Play with sun. I think it is too dark inside. Mayby add glass to windows(reflections make it more interesting). Work with materials(more glossy?)
And test it. Octane offers quick renders so you can do a lot of previews.

you have problem with scale
windows are too close to the floor,and bed looks very big

try take some blueprints of rooms on google

like number said, check your proportions: the windows and their positions, the pillows and the bed, ...

just look into your room at home:)

Thanks Everyone! I need all the help i can get.