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Interior scene_01
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2014 7:56 am
by Daniel79
Hello everyone ,
I wanted to ask a help to improve a job I'm doing in this period.
I do not know what, but omitting materials that are still in the process of decision , something does not convince me and for this I have to ask you for help.
The scene is quite complete ?
The modeling requires other details ?
The light is?
The point of view ( 2-3 ) is ok or would you change anything ?
Comments and criticisms are welcome!!
Bye bye
Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2014 12:49 pm
by MaTtY631990
Hi Daniel79
This looks good but can be improved. Here are a couple of things you can try.
1. try brighter colors and/or improve lighting in the scene. Maybe try different lighting for the scene ie. no sunlight ( HDR or skydome ). Take a look at Ikea shots for some inspiration.
check this link for kitchens:
http://www.ikea.com/gb/en/catalog/categ ... s/kitchen/
2. avoid getting a blurry image and try to recover the details in your scene. Lacking sharpness.
I am not too sure about the wood texture chosen for the shelf on the wall. Try with the wood texture you use for ceiling supports or find a better texture, or are you yet to finish this.
Hope this helps and looking forward to an update

Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:55 pm
by FrankPooleFloating
I smiled when I saw the shelf too. It is OSB. It would be right at home in some bachelor pad that has an electric cable spool as the coffee table.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oriented_strand_board
Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2014 6:01 pm
by kayze
Here are my general thoughts.
Didn't comment on the missing textures and stuff that i believe you are aware of already.
Composition overall:
I think you need to draw the eye towards the kitchen/dining area, since thats the main subject.

Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:39 am
by Daniel79
a small update...
there are few errors of modelling...but i working to remove this.
The image is low resolution excuse me
Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:34 pm
by MaTtY631990
Perfection

. Very good indeed.
Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:49 pm
by whersmy
Let it cook some longer, longer rendertime.
Also I would play with the gamma and ISO settings!
Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2014 3:51 am
by Daniel79
Just a little update regarding light , materials and above all, a bit of post processing to increase AO , exposure , etc ...
Place before and after ....
Re: Interior scene_01
Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2014 8:47 am
by Daniel79
Another small Update...magazine and few small things..