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Product Shot
Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 8:11 am
by Ron
Hi all,
this is some first shots of an orange juice bottle I am working on for an advertising job. I am quite happy with this look but wanted to get some feedback if there is something I could do better.
It is rendered with PMC 16, 5000 samples. Still a bit noisy, but the final renders should get clean with higher sample rates.
Looking forward to your comments.
Ron
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 11:05 am
by lixai
the composition is good, but juice colors ar odd, here are some examples that you can try to use to tweak your colors.
and maybe get rid of the blue in the background.
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 1:05 pm
by Ron
lixai wrote:the composition is good, but juice colors ar odd, here are some examples that you can try to use to tweak your colors.
and maybe get rid of the blue in the background.
Thank you - yes - compared with those images my color looks odd indeed. Will try to bring in more freshness - and some SSS like in the spill image.
Cheers - Ron
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 2:27 am
by Rikk The Gaijin
Agree with lixai, the juice looks like Kiwi's juice more than orange's juice.
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 6:24 am
by Seekerfinder
Shrek would be happy though....
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 2:22 pm
by Ron
Rikk The Gaijin wrote:Agree with lixai, the juice looks like Kiwi's juice more than orange's juice.
Okay, okay - understood
I am working on colors, trying to find suitable parameters for the SSS look. This isn't as simple as it seemed to me ...
Will post my improvements here.
Ron
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 3:57 pm
by Ron
Another try - the color is getting better but the SSS is not working out - cant't find the right values in the material
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 8:09 pm
by Seekerfinder
Ron wrote:Another try - the color is getting better but the SSS is not working out - cant't find the right values in the material
Splash-Bottle_Spill_PMC_16_5000.png
Won't fix the colour but have you played with gamma & transparency?
Seeker
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 8:18 pm
by remKa
I think you need to scale the scattering up big time. Give it a value like 1000 or even 2000.
Re: Product Shot
Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 9:13 pm
by Ron
Seekerfinder wrote:Ron wrote:Another try - the color is getting better but the SSS is not working out - cant't find the right values in the material
Splash-Bottle_Spill_PMC_16_5000.png
Won't fix the colour but have you played with gamma & transparency?
Seeker
gamma not, transparency yes. will try that tomorrow.