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Part of the mansion visual we have been working on as previously posted. DL 8000px then shrunk to 5000px wide.

Hi,
from an architect point of view, the bed is strongly underdimensionate in respect to the suite extension.
the render is amazing.

bye,
andrea

Beautiful renders!

Your other 2 are quite nice also.

Personal opinion is that you need some camera correction to get your lines vertical. Especially on your first 2 images. This mansion project is the perfect candidate for vertical lines. Will really help to ground your images.

The quality of the models and render are great!

best,
O

Very nice render and lighting.
I personally would change two things:

The DOF on the Bed isn´t very realistic. I adds a miniature model look to the left corner of the picture.
And I would try to overexposure the picture outside the window. This would add to realism too.

This is off to a really great start, it's on it's way to being fantastic. I agree with the changes mentioned by others above. These will help a lot.

In addition, I'd make the molding and built in book cases a less diffuse material. Right now they look like the same material as the wall. These would either be sprayed or hand painted and would be a slightly different white than the wall, and wouldn't look this diffuse in real life. They could be anywhere from gloss to matte, but not totally diffuse. Also the nice column in the back corner -- maybe a white marble?