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Posted: **Thu Sep 05, 2013 5:33 pm**

Ok, so here is my entry:
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Update: Just finished the final version:

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I think it looks cool

It is still WIP and I will add some more stuff to it
Tell me if you like it!

Cheers,
Shruszka

Posted: **Fri Sep 13, 2013 5:24 pm**

I like it !
It's like a dream / funnel of dreams! Very nicely done

I'm just a little worried about the OCTANE RENDER logo as it appears very flat (2D insertion like)
I'm eager to see the final version

Best of inspiration

Posted: **Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:43 pm**

Another wip. I thought the first 2 wips were kinda too messy, so I simplified the scene a little.

I hope you like it!

Cheers,
shruszka

Posted: **Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:50 pm**

Yes, it looks better / clearer

Good job
I still think some slight make-up to that Octane logo would drive it to perfection ...

I don't know what exactly - maybe try a strong post processing glow on it ?! (so it doesn't look so sharp and flat ... )

Nice work

eidy

Posted: **Thu Sep 26, 2013 6:04 pm**

Ok, another shot.
I made some kind of a background ( it looked kinda boring without any) and tried to improve the Octane logo.

I think I'm getting close to final version.
I hope you like it!

Cheers,
Shruszka

Posted: **Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:11 pm**

The Octane logo looks better

I would easy up just a little on the background presence

Good work!
Bye,
eidy

Posted: **Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:23 pm**

Hey, I've just finished the final version:

So.. yeah. I hope you like it!
Also, thanks to eidy for his tips.

Cheers,
Shruszka

Posted: **Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:29 am**

Very nice work

You're very welcome

I only hope my tips were indeed helpful - we'll just have to wait on the jury for that, I guess

All best,
eidy

Posted: **Mon Sep 30, 2013 7:53 am**

Oh, and here's the download:

OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel | Final version