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Et si il y a des francophones , je vous salue!!

Excellent work, I love the tonality and light, although the depth of field looks way heavier to me.

Nice,
Some feedback as you asked:
DOF is probably too high like PAQUITO said. it gives a toy feeling to the image,
Reduce the aperture for ex.
The texture on the car bumper is pretty repeated quite obviously & it's quite visible.
The rest is pretty good! Well done.

I don´t agree with the aperture. It gives a nice and visually appealing look to that kind of images. In this particular case I think it works pretty nicely.

The bumper, yes, I see some tiling. Why are you using a texture there? I would put simply a chromy/metallic material.

icelaglace wrote:Nice,
Some feedback as you asked:
DOF is probably too high like PAQUITO said. it gives a toy feeling to the image,
Reduce the aperture for ex.
The texture on the car bumper is pretty repeated quite obviously & it's quite visible.
The rest is pretty good! Well done.

PAQUITO wrote:Excellent work, I love the tonality and light, although the depth of field looks way heavier to me.

Hello gentlemen, then according to your specifications, so I remade this picture, in fact, the chrome on the front was false, the dof down a little bit, because I'm a drug addict of dof.
the photographer is still in me haha!

I think these are great!

what's not to like?

Great images. For my own, the only thing that I think looks weird is the chrome surface behind the front grille of the car.

It looks like there is no air input. I would put instead a pitch black diffuse rough material or some very dark mechanical details, just to suggest the motor, or a second dark grille.

ROUBAL wrote:Great images. For my own, the only thing that I think looks weird is the chrome surface behind the front grille of the car.

It looks like there is no air input. I would put instead a pitch black diffuse rough material or some very dark mechanical details, just to suggest the motor, or a second dark grille.

C'est noté pour la prochaine version ! c'est pas faux!!

I like both images, each one on its own style.

PAQUITO wrote:I like both images, each one on its own style.