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Small trailer - exterior scene

Postby CORE » Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:59 am

CORE Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:59 am
Hi

I would like to post another WIP. I was lighting this model in studio, and then I have decided to try it in exterior scene.
Feel free to comment. I'm still learning octane and trying to use it in my work. Thats why this is only WIP. I wish it become something bigger.

Cheers!

[edit] little post work was done in photoshop, I've added some foliage and retouched lowpoly ground

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Re: Small trailer - exterior scene

Postby Lewis » Fri Jul 15, 2016 10:19 am

Lewis Fri Jul 15, 2016 10:19 am
Model/render looks great, materials and mood are excellent.

Only giveaway is that car, trailer and tires are too clean (like they still are rendered in studio ;)).
There should be some mud, dust, scratches..... on tires, trailer and car. And yes don't for get license plate text/numbers on car.
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Re: Small trailer - exterior scene

Postby deadakos » Fri Jul 15, 2016 7:07 pm

deadakos Fri Jul 15, 2016 7:07 pm
The Wheel track seems to me going upwards and not downwards as should normaly.
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