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Product Rendering- Parasol

Postby mttk » Sun Mar 26, 2017 5:56 pm

mttk Sun Mar 26, 2017 5:56 pm
Product Rendering for a company that produces parasols.
Any constructive comments are welcome
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Re: Product Rendering- Parasol

Postby Marvez » Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:21 pm

Marvez Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:21 pm
a good start :) ..

and..

-there is no texture on the parasol or a natural sag - it appers to be made of tin
- the bracket ( scussion ) on the floor look like white plastic
- wood deck look like plywood with an exotic veneer applied

maybe use PT to get some depth in the adjacent spaces


-- and stop back from the object (not such a tight shot)

hope this helps and i hate when i post and i get no comments.


good work ;)

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Re: Product Rendering- Parasol

Postby mttk » Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:27 pm

mttk Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:27 pm
Thanks a lot!
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