a good start
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and..
-there is no texture on the parasol or a natural sag - it appers to be made of tin
- the bracket ( scussion ) on the floor look like white plastic
- wood deck look like plywood with an exotic veneer applied
maybe use PT to get some depth in the adjacent spaces
-- and stop back from the object (not such a tight shot)
hope this helps and i hate when i post and i get no comments.
good work
-Wm