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Wanna play some pool?

Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 2:28 pm
by radiant
Here is a scene that im making at the moment.
Just something that im doing in my free time.

Im going to be expanding in the number of pools and i might make a interior instead of a HDRi

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And here is a time lapse

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q78Qggw7hTY&feature=channel_video_title[/youtube]

Re: Wanna play some pool?

Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:18 pm
by Sportler
About the scene;
  • Might be a over-used concept, but it looks cool anyway
  • Too little roughness on the balls (look at reference below)
  • The wood looks oversaturated (most of the scene does, actually)
  • Somewhat noisy (Probably because this is in the WIP section)
  • Good timelapse :D
  • The cue looks too short
  • Balls are also too specular
Hope it helps ^

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Re: Wanna play some pool?

Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:05 pm
by radiant
cheers :D, will do some changes. i might add some faint scratches to the balls

Re: Wanna play some pool?

Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:05 am
by ttaberna
It looks soooo 3Dish
The stick is too short and the triangle has too sharp edges. It looks like it is rendered with a skanline engine.
Plus all Sportler said!
Cheers

Re: Wanna play some pool?

Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 2:27 pm
by Sportler
I suggest using a glossy material with a specular value of 0.015 and a roughness of 0.007
At least that's what I used for my billiard scene some time ago ;)

Re: Wanna play some pool?

Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:08 pm
by 3rdeye
overall I like it...nice work and thx for sharing the timelapse

3rdeye