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Wanna play some pool?
Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 2:28 pm
by radiant
Here is a scene that im making at the moment.
Just something that im doing in my free time.
Im going to be expanding in the number of pools and i might make a interior instead of a HDRi
And here is a time lapse
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q78Qggw7hTY&feature=channel_video_title[/youtube]
Re: Wanna play some pool?
Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:18 pm
by Sportler
About the scene;
- Might be a over-used concept, but it looks cool anyway
- Too little roughness on the balls (look at reference below)
- The wood looks oversaturated (most of the scene does, actually)
- Somewhat noisy (Probably because this is in the WIP section)
- Good timelapse

- The cue looks too short
- Balls are also too specular
Hope it helps ^
This is not a render!
Re: Wanna play some pool?
Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:05 pm
by radiant
cheers

, will do some changes. i might add some faint scratches to the balls
Re: Wanna play some pool?
Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:05 am
by ttaberna
It looks soooo 3Dish
The stick is too short and the triangle has too sharp edges. It looks like it is rendered with a skanline engine.
Plus all Sportler said!
Cheers
Re: Wanna play some pool?
Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 2:27 pm
by Sportler
I suggest using a glossy material with a specular value of 0.015 and a roughness of 0.007
At least that's what I used for my billiard scene some time ago

Re: Wanna play some pool?
Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:08 pm
by 3rdeye
overall I like it...nice work and thx for sharing the timelapse
3rdeye