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One Overcast Day.
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:20 am
by Sixthlaw
Hey guys!
Well this my seconds exterior scene to date, please do tell me what you think!:)
High-Res Version:
http://ubuntuone.com/p/mP4
Sixthlaw
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:37 am
by suhail_spa
good start...
its one of the good exterior renders i have seen..
maybe road is a bit too glossy, and the alpha-tree near the car needs some rotation (and maybe ligting up those lamps would also help)..
but i like the overall effect/color scheme...
cheers
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 10:50 am
by Odeas
It looks really good, the building looks great and stands out well.
Some minor comments:
• Shouldn't the street lights be on considering the darkness?
• The size of the car appears to be the height as the entrance to the building? (its a big car granted but not that big lol)
• Too clean even for a new building. The thumb size view looks great but the 'too clean' feel stands out at the larger resolutions.
• The road is very glossy (even for a wet road), but what strikes me more is that its very even. Breaking up the glossiness will make it appear more realistic.
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:23 pm
by steveps3
The people in those offices must have to wear shades the whole time. Those lights are way too bright.
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 9:12 pm
by PSS-PT
Very nice picture!
Only with Octane or with some post-production?
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:41 pm
by mlody47
filter / blur&sharpen / unsharp mask .... .....pleeeease !
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:39 pm
by 8Eggar8
I thought you did something about that menace...
Re: One Overcast Day.
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:32 am
by Sixthlaw
@8eggar8 - Hahaha I thought of the very same thing when rendered. Batman.