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Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2016 12:40 pm
by Scottiefeng
20 mins PT

Please comment for improvement.

Thanks

Re: Queensland interior 001

Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2016 1:08 pm
by Terryvfx
The illumination is really nice! but the unsharp mask is out of control all the hard edges look straight out of a videogame.

Re: Queensland interior 001

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2016 1:29 am
by Scottiefeng
Terryvfx wrote:The illumination is really nice! but the unsharp mask is out of control all the hard edges look straight out of a videogame.

Thanks a lot Terry!

Just trying to fully understand your comments. Did you mean the picture is too grainy/blurry or something else? OR you meant the sharpness is not there?

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2016 6:58 pm
by Builtdown
Hi, I think he meant the sharpening. See the black floor lamp at the corner: what is the glow around it?

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2016 6:24 am
by Scottiefeng
Builtdown wrote:Hi, I think he meant the sharpening. See the black floor lamp at the corner: what is the glow around it?
Yes. I see that. Thanks

Will work on this tonight.

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2016 10:54 am
by Scottiefeng
Builtdown wrote:Hi, I think he meant the sharpening. See the black floor lamp at the corner: what is the glow around it?
Is this one better?

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2016 11:10 am
by Builtdown
Hi,

Yeah, better!
Background is a lot better.

- the fountain looks like it´s floating
- peppers and the olive oil are floating
- maybe some coffee table on the carpet?
- maybe some DOF on the foreground chair?
- should there be a slit between ceiling and walls?
- the floor texture looks too small to my eyes. Maybe make it 100% larger

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2016 12:31 pm
by Terryvfx
Hello it's looking much much better! great job by the way one thing still weird to me is the ceiling normally you wont see a shadow like that around the corners it's just way too pronounce and distracting.

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:39 am
by Scottiefeng
Terryvfx wrote:Hello it's looking much much better! great job by the way one thing still weird to me is the ceiling normally you wont see a shadow like that around the corners it's just way too pronounce and distracting.

Thanks Terry. Appreciate your help.

I try to do shaowline cornice as requested by client. It is recess 10 mm into ceiling space.

Maybe the shadow is a bit too heavey

Re: Queensland interior part 01 pls comment

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2016 3:31 pm
by Scottiefeng
Builtdown wrote:Hi,

Yeah, better!
Background is a lot better.

- the fountain looks like it´s floating
- peppers and the olive oil are floating
- maybe some coffee table on the carpet?
- maybe some DOF on the foreground chair?
- should there be a slit between ceiling and walls?
- the floor texture looks too small to my eyes. Maybe make it 100% larger
any other comments? One more try.

Thanks