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FIrst Exterior night shot
Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:20 pm
by Kalua
C&C are welcome...
Done in C4D R17, Octane V3
Very Little Raw camera filter in photoshop...
Cheers,
Re: FIrst Exterior night shot
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 6:13 pm
by Chrmez
Congrats on your first exterior.. it's not a bad start!
There are quite a few areas to improve on though. Generally I think the materials need a lot
of tweaking, too much glossyness and not enough imperfections.
The window drape looks a bit odd, more like a sail than a light drape flapping in the wind.
That light on the bicycle is pretty distracting and unnecessary, and I'm not quite sure where it's coming from either.
I'm not digging glares either, but that's maybe more of a personal thing. It cheapens it a bit for me at least.
Good luck in tweaking it and making it awesome!
Re: FIrst Exterior night shot
Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 2:59 pm
by Kalua
Thank you, Chrmez
Thats the kind of comments I need.
Cheers