Dining room
Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:05 pm
This is a remake from a project a wasn't really satisfied. Now I have have tryed to take every detail in account.
C&C are very welcome
C&C are very welcome
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Re: Dining room
Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:16 pm
good....but there stil some noise...and the yelow paint(((((((
Re: Dining room
Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:47 pm
To much wood in my opinion, but very realistic render.
The bottleneck looks not correct and the plant is grey, but I lik the yello.
And the lamp is enormous.
Take more of these chairs.
Cheers mib
The bottleneck looks not correct and the plant is grey, but I lik the yello.
And the lamp is enormous.
Take more of these chairs.
Cheers mib
Re: Dining room
Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:30 pm
Another update,
much better imo
much better imo
Re: Dining room
Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:49 am
I like this 
Re: Dining room
Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 2:23 pm
The continuity in the kitchen wood bothers me, all the doors are diferent, if you can make something like this:
http://www.furniturefashion.com/image/2 ... Design.jpg
http://www.furniturefashion.com/image/2 ... Design.jpg
Re: Dining room
Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:04 pm
i really like the atmosphere of the first pic.
as mib already mentioned the scale of the lamp looks strange. additionally you could raise the sub-div level to avoid visible edges. maybe just downscaling would last.
2nd pic: the white chair is kind of full white while the backround is a little to dark. btw i dont like the "mahogany" chair variant, the other one is awesome;)
..just details.
cheers dave
as mib already mentioned the scale of the lamp looks strange. additionally you could raise the sub-div level to avoid visible edges. maybe just downscaling would last.
2nd pic: the white chair is kind of full white while the backround is a little to dark. btw i dont like the "mahogany" chair variant, the other one is awesome;)
..just details.
cheers dave
Re: Dining room
Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 6:41 am
I like your style very much 
nice work. all though your second render is a bit bleached out a bit
nice work. all though your second render is a bit bleached out a bit
Re: Dining room
Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:48 pm
dave62 wrote:i really like the atmosphere of the first pic.
as mib already mentioned the scale of the lamp looks strange. additionally you could raise the sub-div level to avoid visible edges. maybe just downscaling would last.
2nd pic: the white chair is kind of full white while the backround is a little to dark. btw i dont like the "mahogany" chair variant, the other one is awesome;)
..just details.
cheers dave
@dave62,mib2berlin: my girlfriend was so angry i changed the wood on the chairsmib2berlin wrote:To much wood in my opinion, but very realistic render.
The bottleneck looks not correct and the plant is grey, but I lik the yello.
And the lamp is enormous.
Take more of these chairs.
Cheers mib
But i'm doing the renders for my portfolio and i have already used the wood elswhere, I thought i could change it...Wrong!The 2 lamps by the way (the other one just doesn't fit in well on the render) are just a a question of taste the room is very big and I felt it would be a good counterpoint. The interpolation is a good one thx for the heads up.
I've put two PS versions one with lamp one without....I like both