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dream on (New Year's open themed still image competition)
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:30 am
by tubel
Hello there,
so i`ve been away for sometime and i saw the competition
here is a wip i`m working on
any C&C are always good:)
cheers,
Tudor
Re: dream on (New Year's open themed still image competition)
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 12:49 pm
by Skeletor
It looks very nice - good job.
Just a few points I think you could improve. A mini bus in that environment should look dirty or at least have some dirt. At the moment it's as if it just came out the car wash. The same goes for the wheels lying around, the bicycle and even the girl.
The girls clothes is too shiny which makes her look kinda scary as if she's made of porcelain. The skin could look better as well, but I'm not sure if that's doable without SSS.
Re: dream on (New Year's open themed still image competition)
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:00 pm
by tubel
i know. i`m working now on the carpaint,wheels and skin
thank you
Re: dream on (New Year's open themed still image competition)
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 2:29 pm
by tubel
so here is an update. i don`t think i will modify the red paint on the bicycle.