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Fatty new year

Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 5:58 pm
by everything
Hello!

Im working on this image for myself and I was wondering if I could get your opinion. Comments are more than welcome :)

Thanks a lot!
Sergio

Re: Fatty new year

Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 6:32 pm
by itsallgoode9
really nice material on this and a cool concept!

I can't figure out what is going on with the lighter colored tips on the last two numbers.

It looks like these numbers are being squished into a box maybe but I can't really tell. Maybe it would be beneficial to either show the box a little bit more or get rid of it completely? Maybe rotate the image slightly or have the flaps on the box folded outward. i'm not sure but it's a thought.

Conceptually, maybe add some discarded junk food wrappers, containers, cans etc on the ground to help the viewer associate the "2015" with being fat rather than just sausages contorted into the shape.

Re: Fatty new year

Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 8:14 am
by bepeg4d
very funny idea, keep going ;)
ciao beppe

Re: Fatty new year

Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 12:29 pm
by everything
Thanks, guys!
The cut its a problem with the UVs that I have already fixed :)
I will add some cracks to the "door" where is trying to come out so like the anxious fatty it's eager to eat as many burgers as possible ;)

I will post more today :)

Thanks again!

Re: Fatty new year

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 10:56 am
by mbetke
looks like a cut out part of a brain.