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Rear shot ^_^

Good start, thanks for sharing. Great to see you are able to produce this kind of work in a short time. keep them coming

Thanks a lot

Hello gamil,

your render is a nice start, but there some room for improvment.

1. You could place the car a bit more in the middle of the image.
2. Get rid of the DOF (it looks like a toycar).
3. Get rid of the chromed Rims, execpt its a Hiphopcruiser
4. The tires could be more black.
5. The car itself needs some more highlights on the front and back, even if it "comes out of the dark".
Maybe you try some differnt HDR´s or place some lights around the car?
6. The carfinish could shine a bit more.
7. Remove the licenseplate holder or put some onto it.

djart

Thank you djart

how about this shots?

Rear View