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apartment building
Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 1:22 pm
by kxl
Hi all, i want to share my latest work with you.
Archicad + Octane plugin
about 30 min / image
DL - Diffuse + a little PS for people and lens.
Re: apartment building
Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2014 9:21 am
by Seekerfinder
Hi kxl,
Nice compositions. Good use of colour. Other improvements:
1. A bit of lens-shift would help - particularly on the second shot.
2. Scale of characters & car on the 3rd shot is way out - it could really discredit a shot.
3. I like your lighting approach but I wonder if more of a sunset sky (or at least a bit darker - more like the third one) would not be more effective in the second shot. But then you might have to work on the building lighting a bit (?) - it's worth a shot.
Best,
Seeker
Re: apartment building
Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2014 11:27 am
by kxl
Thank you Seeker for the tips, i will try to redo the renders
