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the vision of 3D-Union and its members is the dream of a free and independent society where all people can shape their lives according to their abilities and inclinations.

Our goal is to pave the way for creative people in the 3D industry to be independent and secure and give clients transparent and qualified access to the market for 3D experts.

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Yo. I just spent a minute on your site (for shits-n-giggles.. not looking for more work) and I really think you need to bring someone in to write some English copy for the English version of your site... Unless you are damn good at English AND writing copy, you are not doing yourself any favors by having the English side of your site full of strange copy. I'm sure it is just a matter of things not translating well from German to English by someone who is not a whiz at English...

A good example:

The vision of 3D-Union and its members is the dream of a free and independent society where all people can shape their lives according to their abilities and inclinations.

Sorry bro, but that just sounds... weird.. and kind of creepy.. like Heaven's Gate (cult) creepy....

Another:

Increasingly advanced technology such as 3D printing, animation and 3D visualizations are conquering many companies, agencies and private households.

Conquering many companies... Really?

Please take my advice and outsource your English copywriting immediately. You could probably email your copy (the current English) to a copy writer and have a version shot back to you the next day, that would not only not be creepy, but would likely say what you truly intended -- unless of course, the German version is just as badly written -- then it is time to farm out two writing gigs.