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Hi guys-
Here's something I've been picking at. A window blinds company called us to see if we can help reduce costs with the photography of their products. They build traditional sets and I'm sure it's very expensive. So as usual I crank out a sample to help sell us as the go to vendor. Take a look at what I've got here. I think it can be better but I need some new ideas. To me it's too clean, I need a little more chaos I think. More desk clutter? Critique away.

Thanks for the help!
alec

7 titans?! oh my gosh. how long did this take to render?

looks good btw. great to see steadily improving works from users.

Great nice setting of a room...

Room looks great!

But if it's for a window blinds company, I think you should do more closeups of the blinds...in detail.

best,
O

Olitech wrote:Room looks great!

But if it's for a window blinds company, I think you should do more closeups of the blinds...in detail.

best,
O

agree with O : Less clutter = more focus.

Hey, this looks really great! Awesome work!
I saw the image before I read the description, the good news is that I thought the blinds realy stood out as the strongest part of the image!
In terms of achieving more realism, it's hard to put a finger on what might help... Perhaps the image is looking a little too flat. Is this rendered with DL + AO? If so, maybe try DL GI Diffuse, or Path tracing (hell, you've got the titans to throw at it!) ... I guess I'd expect areas like under the desk and sofa to be more in shadow. A little further clutter might help too as you say
The image looks great though! Congrats! Really love the blinds and chair!

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it. Here's an update with better cropping showing off the blinds better. Oh, and this is PMC at 3000 samples. Takes about 6 minutes.

Alec

Hi
Imo, the blinds are not a decorative object neither only sunlight breaker. The goal is more privacy of lifes. So i would focus on an night exterior scene which we can see interior.A villa with a pool on grasses. something like that.


And for details would take photos. (very close)


Just my two cents..