OTOY Forums

hi guy's

all is on the tittle , just a speed scratch model from my parts lybraries
many pieces come from older model ,( 8 mlls's polys ) done for the fun . . .
build in max

click for hi rez

i hope you 'll like it

kaDDD

Great render! Looks awesome

Indeed. Very realistic.

Suv

wow
ciao beppe

Awesome, except for a couple of easily changed things.

The procedural map you use on the steel in the background is too strong and scaled too large. modify the scale and lower the power.
The image for the wall in the background is too low resolution for the image, it looks off.

The head and mechanics it's resting on are awesome, but those things above take away from the image.

WOw man!! this kicks ass!!

Any chance for a wireframe?

Very nice. I love the design of the cyborg chest.
Nice lighting.
The only thing I would correct in Post is the Rust Texture on the
yellow steel construction. The texture is repeating it self. Seems you textured one
of the main "arcs" and copied them. No need to render it again, I would simply
use any kind of clone stamp tool to get rid of the repetition

DIO : hi man , you're right , i have just put a uw's box on the central structur , nothing really done , for ajust that , i have simply rotated the gizmo , repetion is now breaked


slepy8: thanks man , and please find more down some screen's

kavorka: hi mister , +1 for your feedback , i dont have see this uw's uncorrect before pushing the rendering buttons , this object wasn't correction box mapped .. .
and i have change the concret to , strange , my textures is large , but this result with bump is really bad , certainly a too noisy base .. .

bepeg4d : thanks guy

suvakas : thanks too , i hope make more realistic rendering with time , i dont know octane since a long time , since 3months for be exact . ..

please find here , a wire frame view
and the finality of this pict was to put an head ( holograme face ) , i ll post a futur version with an holographic head on this bot ( thuis not a wip sectio n on the forum , i ll not post some intermediat files , but this one is just a 18ghrs concept , with all problems cane include a project in scratch like this , its why the actual face look like a radar assembly . . . .

This is a very cool concept, looks like it could "charge up" and start moving

Very nice lighting, I agree about the back wall textures, they are too strong and take away from the main part od the image.
Do you use a "light cookie" for the light shadow pattern on the floor?