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hi all,

I start this picture with a friend, we are inspired by a artwork (deus ex 2) but we moving away from origin picture.
There is still need work for texturing and modeling
Soon,I post following the advancement.

If you have some board or critical

Thanks



Octane pmc 32

really awesome render . Like your use of texture emissions here and the subtlety of sheen on walls and other materials. Good Job.

the proportions do not fit.
The folders are too big....

Thank you
Yes, folders are 15% biggest, this issue is solved.

the hard drive and books on the right look awesome, very realistic. Too me, the green light coming out of the laptop is very off putting. takes away from the image I think. Try a cooler color, a blue green or just blue would look better. Also make it less strong and less saturated so its subtle.

the coffee cups on the left look really weird. I'm guessing its a perspective issue as I'm assuming they are correctly modeled. Either way, they should be changed or removed as the look off.

also, the papers scattered around need writing, coffee stains, grime ect...

too clean at the moment.

Thanks a lot kavorka.
You're right, i change in the next picture

Hi all!

I post the new picture, we have changed the ambiance, corrected some issues and added mod.
I hope it is better now!
If you have board, don't hesitate
Thanks

I think it's an awesome render - the lighting, the mood etc are spot on and it looks for sure 100% photorealistic.

The models are all good and the placement and composition is awesome.

About the only criticism I could give is that the edges of the models generally overall seem to be too sharp - not enough variation. I look around at the room I'm in and there's *nothing* in here with edges as sharp as those on your models. Also: look at the folds on the bed: they are very sharp and un-natural looking.

That said the other elements of your render are better than I can currently do so kudos to you.

Great one...looks like my office sometimes
cheers