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Living Room First Attempt
Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 8:37 pm
by Iksmada
Hi,
This is the first time I've modeled a full room and also my first results with Octane.
All modeled in C4D R14 + Zbrush 4R5
Rendered in Octane C4D BETA 0.59, PMC defaults, HDRI (no sun) no post (apart from 1 small fix)
Thanks for looking!
Re: Living Room First Attempt
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2013 12:06 pm
by Proupin
The place has potential, the modeling is pretty nice, but the renders are way to dark... About the top floor railings, I would space the vertical metal 'rods' farther away from each other, right now the glass panels are perfect squares and maybe a 2:1 rectangular proportion would look better... and those stairs need a railing too or people will die : )) about carpets being all bumpy, it's nice but make it more subtle. The light fixtures are so bright it's blowing up the pixels, I suggest you lower their intensity and use bloom and glare effects for this.
Well I hope this helps improve your renders, and update it here if you do
Re: Living Room First Attempt
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2013 12:31 pm
by peterd
I hope you don't mind, I had a go with your image to see what can be squeezed out of it.
Regards