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Office

Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 4:39 pm
by cadvis
Office visualization..AO3, HDRI, 100 samples. Hope you will enjoy.

Re: Office

Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 12:55 pm
by Leonardo
Looks good, nice materials, very convincing lighting. Did it take very long?

If you're playing with the DOF, make sure to blur as well the background that you can see through the windows - the pylons look way too sharp, if the focus is on the table.

This is a composition comment: I would omit the bottles of water, they're too big and too many, and look very cheap. Put instead a tray with a glass bottle (a posh one like St. Pellegrino) and a set of glasses

Re: Office

Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 1:23 pm
by cadvis
Thank you very much ~Leonardo for your constructive critique. Much appreciated. Will try to repost updated images as soon as I can.

It took about 1.5hr - modeling & rendering (5min rendering per frame, probably should leave it to cook for a bit longer to get rid of all of the noise but i couldn't wait :) ) + approx 0.5hr postpro (color correction, image background etc).

All the best.

Re: Office

Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 7:31 pm
by kavorka
those are the largest water bottles I have ever seen!!!

I think they can do something for the scene, just make them the actual size of a small water bottle.

Re: Office

Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 11:04 am
by Alain
I admit you to check out the proportions and messurements of the objects in your scene (for example bottles, chairs, ...) ;-)

Kind regards
Alain

Re: Office

Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 1:07 pm
by Leonardo
Actually, those 'chairs' that you're showing are more like sofas, I don't think it's an adequate choice for a conference room, although they look very luxurious

Re: Office

Posted: Thu May 23, 2013 6:22 pm
by cadvis
Hello,

Thank you very much all for your critique. Much appreciated. Will try to fix all the glitches as soon as I can.

Thanks you.