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Under the Freeway

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 9:21 pm
by skywxp3d
Heres my latest - the original Octane render
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After adding MR fog and post effects/tonemapping...
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http://skykensok.blogspot.com/

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 9:27 pm
by icelaglace
First one is great, I like that kind of render :)!
2nd is a little too much.

Great work !

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 9:44 pm
by skywxp3d
I allways overdo it I think, Its really hard to reel it in somtimes! haha

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:39 pm
by icelaglace
skywxp3d wrote:I allways overdo it I think, Its really hard to reel it in somtimes! haha
You might get something similar on Octane probably soon :)

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:09 am
by merid888
how you did the volume light ? amazing render !!! :o

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 1:19 am
by remon_v
Really nice render!
Only comment I have now is the scale looks weird.
Maybe the Ivy is to large?

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 4:57 am
by ROUBAL
I like the two, very much !

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 9:21 am
by skywxp3d
merid888 wrote:how you did the volume light ? amazing render !!! :o
mental ray parti_volume

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 3:07 pm
by Sportler
Scale looks completely off. It is the smallest and most narrow "under a freeway" area I've ever seen. Besides there is some texture stretching happening on the columns and it just looks wrong :/ That being said, I like the idea and such. Post-pro image doesn't really look a whole lot better tbh. Anyway, with some time you'll be good! By the way, I am quite a picky person and I am not easily impressed.

Re: Under the Freeway

Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:03 pm
by skywxp3d
Sportler wrote:Scale looks completely off. It is the smallest and most narrow "under a freeway" area I've ever seen. Besides there is some texture stretching happening on the columns and it just looks wrong :/ That being said, I like the idea and such. Post-pro image doesn't really look a whole lot better tbh. Anyway, with some time you'll be good! By the way, I am quite a picky person and I am not easily impressed.

Excellent, thanks for the direct critique, im going to address that today...