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Hey guys,

I have a commercial render I am allowed to post.
It's almost finished with some minor tweaks that have to be done.
If you guys have a any comments or suggestions, just fire away.

Rendered in PMC kernel.

Modelled in Modo, rendering in RC3 and post done in Photoshop.

Thanks for watching.

Nice work . Just a couple of things you could try to improve. If possible try to get some more bump going on ground textures. Also looks like there is a smoothing issue with fence on the right, wants to appear flat. Other then that all looks good.

for my opinion the render is ok (even I prefer phtotreal renders),
as Maty say: a little bit of bump in the road and sidewalk texture would emprove the overall quality.

Cheers, Paolo

Hey guys, thanks for the replies.
The project is finished, client is happy.
But for my portfolio I wanted to improve the image a little bit.
I think I'm almost there and this is what I got so far.
I want to render the final version very soon, so if you have comment hurry!

This image is straight out of Octane except for the sky and a little bit of bloom.
In the final version I will do proper post production, add some reflections in the windows and stuff.