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Home Theater Rack
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 12:55 pm
by marcio_max
Alright! Finally a real job.
I made this image for a furniture industry.
The carpet was rendered separately because of the large amount of polygons.
=)
Re: Home Theater Rack
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 1:29 pm
by Sportler
Everything looks just a little bit too smooth and unreal. Especially the home theater! The speakers lack definition of the rough texture usually found outside speakkers, and the chamfering should probably be exchanged by some kind of flat-ish hexagonial pattern:
Or just something rougher than what currently is. The carpet does have some issues where the edges touches the table and the phone ( which looks kind of weird
). It is kind of obvious that it's some kind of shady business going on there
Anyway, good luck with the client!
Re: Home Theater Rack
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:59 pm
by marcio_max
Sportler, thanks for your comments and tips! It helps me a lot. I'll try to improve the texture of the speakers. I'm still new in this business, but I think I'm in the right way. =)
Re: Home Theater Rack
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:30 pm
by Leme3D
Muito bom!!!
Realmente ainda falta algumas coisas para chegar a um nivel mais profi porem acredito que seu cliente esteja sim satisfeito.
Agora se vc quer algo melhor, procure usa mapa de relevo que tera um bom realismo na sua cena.
Parabens pelo render!!!
Qual tempo de render? PMC?
Ob: É sempre bom encontrar brazucas por aqui =D
Re: Home Theater Rack
Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:06 pm
by marcio_max
Leme3D wrote:Muito bom!!!
Realmente ainda falta algumas coisas para chegar a um nivel mais profi porem acredito que seu cliente esteja sim satisfeito.
Agora se vc quer algo melhor, procure usa mapa de relevo que tera um bom realismo na sua cena.
Parabens pelo render!!!
Qual tempo de render? PMC?
Ob: É sempre bom encontrar brazucas por aqui =D
Valeu pela dica! Usei Pathtrace e demorou cerca de 20 minutos com resolução de 1200x700