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Hello guys,

I made this for my sister.
it was for her Photoshop class, all she needs to do is to add some text.
and make it look like a advertisement.
And since my name is on there, she will have to give me credit. or she can just call the product Radiant.
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Made in: Blender 2.5
Post in : PS
Render time was under 1 min
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Would You buy this lipstick

Nope... Lipstick from hell

Hmm. Some gothic chick would buy it for sure:)

I insist, the darkness in all your images are uncalled for

Try to make the font as simple as possible.

Do some safe areas like margin - make space for text.

Expose Your model not the background. ( background is in the center , and all the things are in corners - its not good composition ( central composition is not good either ) - try to make ppl look where You want them to look. )

And remember that You dont have to show the whole "apple" to people, to make them know its actually "an apple" - Thats my golden rule.

I know its only theory, but those rules will learn You different approaches.


Oh and by the way - Whats that thingy thingy in the top right corner??

Why You are always so hurry

Radiant, apart all the rendering part as you've been releasing a lot of these recently
in my opinion you should also focus on some composition / font / colour knowledge that's available all around
it will definitely take your works to another level

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_dZZtElhnNhs/S ... mean+b.jpg

http://jakegarn.com/wp-content/uploads/ ... ian-24.jpg

http://www.colourlovers.com/

http://www.shotaddict.com/article/asset ... on%202.jpg

http://frameaway.dv8.ro/standard_frametypes.html

and this one's really odd yet may be helpful;) http://www.aquariaforums.com/articles/A ... uascaping/

all best
j

mlody47 wrote:Oh and by the way - Whats that thingy thingy in the top right corner??

Why You are always so hurry

That is a flower with some liquored running down from it. [Yellow/spec]

buda wrote:

Not bad shock i hope XD

jedru wrote: and this one's really odd yet may be helpful;)

Cheers for the links.

And thanks for all the other replies

jedru wrote:Radiant, apart all the rendering part as you've been releasing a lot of these recently
in my opinion you should also focus on some composition / font / colour knowledge that's available all around
it will definitely take your works to another level

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_dZZtElhnNhs/S ... mean+b.jpg

http://jakegarn.com/wp-content/uploads/ ... ian-24.jpg

http://www.colourlovers.com/

http://www.shotaddict.com/article/asset ... on%202.jpg

http://frameaway.dv8.ro/standard_frametypes.html

and this one's really odd yet may be helpful;) http://www.aquariaforums.com/articles/A ... uascaping/

all best
j

thanks, good links