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Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:56 pm
by madcoo
Indeed you're totally right, I'm going to "tighten up" the POV and focus mainly on the mixer.
I actually noticed that adding stuff didn't add that much to the scene as a whole...
I'll try something different, cheers!
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 9:14 pm
by mlody47
matej wrote:It's turning out nice!
Try some different POVs that will make the main subject stand out more. The other stuff is there just as a 'filler', the blender is the important piece.
+1
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:33 am
by madcoo
Yep, you're totally right guys, I'll focus more on the blender/mixer itself.
Thanks for your comms
If I remember well, we can post as many images as we want, I might post 2 or 3 different images, with diverse POVs...
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:54 am
by mlody47
ofcourse...
I was posting one image with like 4 different cameras response curve.
Put as more as You can.
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:32 am
by madcoo
Thanks mlody47!
By the way, your Comp Entry looks great
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:16 am
by gaua
Looks good. I love blender.
There is something what bother me. Knifes looks weird.
Please compare with these references.
Or it could be an ostrich egg...
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:43 am
by madcoo
Thanks gaua, you're totally right - I definitely have to fix this.
Cheers!
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:56 pm
by madcoo
Hi guys!
I just tried another PoV - I think this one's much better.
What do you think?
I only changed this, I didn't fix texture issues (like the blank post-it note for example), or anything else.
I also tried a Vintage Film, I think it adds something to the picture too, BUT post-it notes didn't exist yet in the 1950's !!!
Thanks for your much appreciated comms !!!
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:35 pm
by madcoo
Hi again !
Here's an update - I now really want to keep the Vintage look and "feel" of the Kodak Ektachrome 100 plusCD film
-> so I'll have to get rid of the post-it note, 'cause they didn't exist yet in the 1950's...
I'm also posting a second image with Photoshop post-prod, but I'll have to check the 1st post again, and see if that kind of effect is allowed...
Please keep posting your comms
Cheers everyone!
Re: KitchenAid Artisan - 2011 New Year Competition Entry - WIP
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:13 pm
by madcoo
I just tried to add some flour on the spoon, the flour "bag" and the pie dish, but I'm not really keen on it...
I like the effect it has on the spoon but not on the other items.
What do you think?
Thanks in advance for your comms!
