Re: Under the Freeway
Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:28 pm
I really like what you have done here. This is a very good start. The rendering is awesome. Composition is great but few technical aspects.
The loose rocks need their own texture so they dont blend this much with the ground.
The bottles should be uncapped, i dont think winos cap their bottles as they pitch them.
With wine goes cigarette a few discarded butts will add to the realism, maybe even candy or food wrapper
Creepers or Ivy go for moisture so a wet spot or mildewed area should justify the creepers moving towards the center, like a flow-off of water.
All in all this is very good and thank you for sharing your work with us.
The loose rocks need their own texture so they dont blend this much with the ground.
The bottles should be uncapped, i dont think winos cap their bottles as they pitch them.
With wine goes cigarette a few discarded butts will add to the realism, maybe even candy or food wrapper
Creepers or Ivy go for moisture so a wet spot or mildewed area should justify the creepers moving towards the center, like a flow-off of water.
All in all this is very good and thank you for sharing your work with us.