by Builtdown » Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:20 pm
Builtdown
Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:20 pm
Hi,
The last version is the best so far. The chair at the front was a good addition.
Here´s my comments:
- The carpet looks too thick and weird sized. Normally there would be equal amount of wood floor on each side of the sofa but now it´s under the sofa at the end and not touching sofa on the right.
- I would change the weird sticks with red berries on the coffee table to some nice flower
- Definetly add some DOF. The front chair and the flower at the balcony should not be in focus
- I think you should raise the background a bit
- I would open couple of balcony windows
- I think this kind of large and expensive house should have a bigger dining table. Now it only has 4 chairs. Maybe add another four.
- I hate the dining table ceiling light. Do you have a better one?
- I think the white "thing" on the left side blocks the dining area too much. Maybe move it a bit or make it smaller.
- Make the Morrison-painting bigger and move it a bit off the wall (0,5cm)
- There seems to be an evening sun shining. I would like to see a more dramatic feel, especially on the ceiling and ot the sofa side where there is no direct sun light. Make the scene a bit less lit and turn on the lights.