"Back Garden" - By: oguzbir Tweet

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Back Garden

Submitted By: oguzbir
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Wouldn't it be nice to have a back garden like this. Butterflies flapping around and you see distant flock of birds enjoying the view of your garden. :)
Created solely for the Metaverse submission.

[Goldorak]

Great work!!

[oguzbir]

Great work!!

Cheers

[kavorka]

Nice!

My inital crit would be to change your birds. They are all the same model, just positioned differently. Get their wings flapping differently and it would add to the realism.

[oguzbir]

Nice!

My inital crit would be to change your birds. They are all the same model, just positioned differently. Get their wings flapping differently and it would add to the realism.

Thanks for the crit. & u're right. It had better give more detail to the birds as well.
AFAIK there is no chance of changing the submissions.

[Goldorak]

If you would like to re-submit, please let us know and we will help update the entry, which we will do during these early weeks of the content. We understand this is a new medium and that there may be changes you would like to make as you work more with VR and 360 rendering.

We will also be adding a very simple VR gallery viewer to OTOY.com (today we hope) that you can use to post WIP entries and get feedback before making an official submission.

These will also be pulled down by the ORBX media player app for Gear VR (following the next refresh).

Thanks!

[oguzbir]

Hi Goldorak,
Thank you for the re-submission offer.
Actually I like my submission as is. No need to re-submit. I was just being kind for the critic I received.

On the other hand I did suffer from testing the VR before render. It would be great if there would be a easier way to test before hand.
Which I think you're working on it already...

Lastly I'd like to share a wip of the image in earlier stages.
At first I thought I would be a scene competition rather than a still image. But this is maybe the best way to start for the VR era..

Thanks.

[dotcommer]

Nice product placement

[oguzbir]

Nice product placement

I didn't do it. It must have been a bug of some sort