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OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel | Final version

Postby shruszka » Thu Sep 05, 2013 5:33 pm

shruszka Thu Sep 05, 2013 5:33 pm
Ok, so here is my entry:
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Update: Just finished the final version:

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    WIP1
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    WIP2
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I think it looks cool ;)
It is still WIP and I will add some more stuff to it
Tell me if you like it!

Cheers,
Shruszka
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel

Postby eidy » Fri Sep 13, 2013 5:24 pm

eidy Fri Sep 13, 2013 5:24 pm
I like it !
It's like a dream / funnel of dreams! Very nicely done :)

I'm just a little worried about the OCTANE RENDER logo as it appears very flat (2D insertion like)
I'm eager to see the final version ;) Best of inspiration :)
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel

Postby shruszka » Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:43 pm

shruszka Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:43 pm
Another wip. I thought the first 2 wips were kinda too messy, so I simplified the scene a little.
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I hope you like it!

Cheers,
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel

Postby eidy » Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:50 pm

eidy Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:50 pm
Yes, it looks better / clearer :)
Good job
I still think some slight make-up to that Octane logo would drive it to perfection ... ;)
I don't know what exactly - maybe try a strong post processing glow on it ?! (so it doesn't look so sharp and flat ... )

Nice work :)
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel

Postby shruszka » Thu Sep 26, 2013 6:04 pm

shruszka Thu Sep 26, 2013 6:04 pm
Ok, another shot.
I made some kind of a background ( it looked kinda boring without any) and tried to improve the Octane logo.

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I think I'm getting close to final version.
I hope you like it!

Cheers,
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel

Postby eidy » Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:11 pm

eidy Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:11 pm
The Octane logo looks better :)
I would easy up just a little on the background presence ;)

Good work!
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel

Postby shruszka » Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:23 pm

shruszka Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:23 pm
Hey, I've just finished the final version:

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So.. yeah. I hope you like it!
Also, thanks to eidy for his tips.

Cheers,
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel | Final version

Postby eidy » Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:29 am

eidy Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:29 am
Very nice work :)
You're very welcome :)
I only hope my tips were indeed helpful - we'll just have to wait on the jury for that, I guess ;)

All best,
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Re: OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel | Final version

Postby shruszka » Mon Sep 30, 2013 7:53 am

shruszka Mon Sep 30, 2013 7:53 am
Oh, and here's the download:
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