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Need advises to enhance image please

Postby HHbomb » Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:33 am

HHbomb Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:33 am
Hi,
I made this image for my book, but I'm not satisfied. It is a commercial image in mind... so can't make drama effects.
Thanks
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby bepeg4d » Wed Aug 02, 2017 7:13 am

bepeg4d Wed Aug 02, 2017 7:13 am
Hi HHbomb,
wow, very good image, but I would like to see another version with less FOV/distortion, if possible, and a little bit of DOF, especially for the outside, the white glass line in the balcony is a bit annoying, in my opinion.
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby HHbomb » Wed Aug 02, 2017 10:40 am

HHbomb Wed Aug 02, 2017 10:40 am
Hi, thanks for your kind words. :-)
But don't hesitate to kick my ass, it is what I need to work more ! :mrgreen:
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby HHbomb » Wed Aug 16, 2017 6:25 am

HHbomb Wed Aug 16, 2017 6:25 am
small update...
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby Builtdown » Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:20 pm

Builtdown Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:20 pm
Hi,

The last version is the best so far. The chair at the front was a good addition.
Here´s my comments:
- The carpet looks too thick and weird sized. Normally there would be equal amount of wood floor on each side of the sofa but now it´s under the sofa at the end and not touching sofa on the right.
- I would change the weird sticks with red berries on the coffee table to some nice flower
- Definetly add some DOF. The front chair and the flower at the balcony should not be in focus
- I think you should raise the background a bit
- I would open couple of balcony windows
- I think this kind of large and expensive house should have a bigger dining table. Now it only has 4 chairs. Maybe add another four.
- I hate the dining table ceiling light. Do you have a better one?
- I think the white "thing" on the left side blocks the dining area too much. Maybe move it a bit or make it smaller.
- Make the Morrison-painting bigger and move it a bit off the wall (0,5cm)
- There seems to be an evening sun shining. I would like to see a more dramatic feel, especially on the ceiling and ot the sofa side where there is no direct sun light. Make the scene a bit less lit and turn on the lights.
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby Builtdown » Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:40 pm

Builtdown Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:40 pm
and by more dramatic I meant something like this:
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby Builtdown » Thu Aug 24, 2017 9:33 am

Builtdown Thu Aug 24, 2017 9:33 am
The carpet can also be under the sofa but then I think it should be under the sofa at both sides, not just at one side.
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby HHbomb » Mon Aug 28, 2017 2:29 pm

HHbomb Mon Aug 28, 2017 2:29 pm
@Builtdown
Thanks . It is very precious to have constructive feedback from people. :-)
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Re: Need advises to enhance image please

Postby MildMustard » Mon Aug 28, 2017 5:54 pm

MildMustard Mon Aug 28, 2017 5:54 pm
Really lovely image. I think in the end it boils down to everyone's personal taste. I think Builtdown's edit is nice, but a little too saturated for me. The addition of the chair is really a nice touch making the image feel more complete.
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