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Attic environment

Postby grimm » Thu Feb 16, 2017 7:18 am

I have been working on an attic environment that I would like to use as a virtual studio for several subjects. This is what I have so far.

attic12.png


I'm having some kind of uv issue with the brick wall. I have tried everything I could think of to fix it, short of recreating the wall. Any ideas?

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Re: Attic environment

Postby Marvez » Thu Feb 16, 2017 5:39 pm

Hi Jason,

good start, positive criticism is .. :
1. Scale of space seems off
2. lack of depth in displacement / bump in all three surfaces wall , floor, roof
3. window looks cut out and miss the opportunity to give the all depth by being flat (maybe a little bigger or a tracery window for add dynamics

hope this helps

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Re: Attic environment

Postby grimm » Thu Feb 16, 2017 6:47 pm

Thanks WM, I agree, I have been struggling with the scale. I'm going to scale down the rafters and the roofing boards, hopefully that will help. The window does have a frame and sill, but I haven't put the window in yet. I can bump up the displacement as well.
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Re: Attic environment

Postby grimm » Fri Feb 17, 2017 7:45 am

I rescaled the rafters and added a bit more depth to the displacements. I also changed out the floor texture for hopefully a better one.

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attic15.png


Tomorrow I will add the window and I have some other plans as well.
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