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My Dream Office

Postby bagel » Sat Dec 29, 2018 3:10 am

bagel Sat Dec 29, 2018 3:10 am
My wife and I have always had a romantic attachment to industrial spaces, what with raw brick, exposed beams, concrete and the like. We dream of one day converting an industrial space into a warm and lived in home. Who knows!
Over the last few days I've been setting up shots to render of my dream office (with dream computer included.)

Software: Cinema 4D
Renderer: OR 4
Models: Mostly CGAxis but a few custom, from scratch. I'm still working on that aspect of CG design.
Office Daytime1.jpg


Any feedback would be appreciated.
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Re: My Dream Office

Postby frankmci » Sat Dec 29, 2018 6:10 pm

frankmci Sat Dec 29, 2018 6:10 pm
Overall, that's a wonderful render, but that poured epoxy bar-top finish on the floor is a bit distracting in an otherwise very convincing image.
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Re: My Dream Office

Postby bagel » Sun Dec 30, 2018 3:39 am

bagel Sun Dec 30, 2018 3:39 am
Ah, I think you really nailed down for me what was so off about that floor. epoxy bar-top... something was bugging both my wife and I about it. I'll have another go at the material and see if I can't take it down a notch. Originally, I had bare wood with no finish, but then I thought about that office chair going over that would be a nightmare. I'll have to find a compromise. Thank you for the feedback!
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Re: My Dream Office

Postby bagel » Mon Dec 31, 2018 5:05 pm

bagel Mon Dec 31, 2018 5:05 pm
Took another stab at the floor. Scaled it down a little bit and tried to model the same diffuse gloss coating on the floor in my dining room. Better?

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Re: My Dream Office

Postby frankmci » Sun Jan 06, 2019 4:09 am

frankmci Sun Jan 06, 2019 4:09 am
Ah, there you go! Nice work.
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Re: My Dream Office

Postby whersmy » Sun Jan 06, 2019 6:52 pm

whersmy Sun Jan 06, 2019 6:52 pm
bagel wrote:My wife and I have always had a romantic attachment to industrial spaces, what with raw brick, exposed beams, concrete and the like. We dream of one day converting an industrial space into a warm and lived in home. Who knows!
Over the last few days I've been setting up shots to render of my dream office (with dream computer included.)

Software: Cinema 4D
Renderer: OR 4
Models: Mostly CGAxis but a few custom, from scratch. I'm still working on that aspect of CG design.
Office Daytime1.jpg


Any feedback would be appreciated.


Looks coolQ
The floor could use a normal/bump map for irregularities
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