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Gazebo on the beach

Postby mccsvt » Fri Feb 03, 2017 9:01 pm

mccsvt Fri Feb 03, 2017 9:01 pm
hello,
this is a job that I made a few months ago. I had made with Direct Light, but then I was not satisfied and then I did it again in PT.
What do you think?
Thanks
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Re: Gazebo on the beach

Postby glimpse » Tue Feb 07, 2017 6:04 pm

glimpse Tue Feb 07, 2017 6:04 pm
now these a pretty nice.

the thing that bugs most from first looks seems to be material of greenery - all those leaves does not look too realistic. Framing & composition might be another place to improve, but I guess that's more about personal taste. Overall good work, but I would put a bit more time into leaves & maybe breaking that big stone surface.

water is amazing by the way!
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Re: Gazebo on the beach

Postby mccsvt » Thu Feb 09, 2017 8:54 am

mccsvt Thu Feb 09, 2017 8:54 am
Thanks Glimpse, for your comments and your point of view ;)
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